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Random Reader / JD's avatar

Wonderful and well written.

Two phrases spoke to me : ' Safety dulls the soul’s claws' and 'responsibility has teeth'.

I hope your house has a most wonderful Holiday Season

KevinM's avatar

Exactly the two phrases that grabbed me by the strings.

Thank you, Ian

Random Reader / JD's avatar

Interesting how those two speak to preparation for tumultuous times ...

Tom from WNY's avatar

A beautiful short Christmas tale, Ian! May you and Rita have a Very Merry Christmas!

As I just remarked to a friend; at age 14, I got my first firearm (no safe for storage, just an open gun rack) and was trusted with ammo! I got my first pellet pistol (that shaped my life) and learned to run a chainsaw (gas powered and pre-chain brake). Mom & Dad understood that boys needed responsibility and accountability to become real men.

John Wiles's avatar

Beautiful ... and true. God bless you and all you hold dear. Merry Christmas!

Steve S6's avatar

"And someone, still, must bring the fire."

Ooo, that brought shivers.

Niko Haapala's avatar

Nice! Always great to see Finland get some love. We have some awesome mythology, need to write a story utilizing them at some point.

Weapons of Legend's avatar

A beautiful Christmas story! Thank you for posting and sharing with us.

May you and yours have a very Merry Christmas.

Sherman Watkins's avatar

I just had to stop and admire the word vulpine (and wonder how long it took to overcome spell check.)

Ian's avatar
Dec 17Edited

Spell-check and I have a "love/hate" relationship -- it loves to screw with me, and I just hate the whole algorithm.

The Scuttlebutt's avatar

Great JOB. Got Yule my friend.

Heather Wiegel's avatar

What a wonderful tale!!! My childhood was spent exploring then nearby woods, getting lost a few times but always finding my way out with heart pounding from fear of never finding that way home. The whooshing breath of relief when I did. Never told Mom, she would have been furious. Girls were supposed to be delicate little flowers. She didn't get her flower until my daughter came along. I was the tomboy. The explorer, the tree climber, the gardener, the animal crazy kid, the one who asked what if rather more frequently than she was comfortable with. But it also helped when I started learning to cook. What if I do this instead of that, or use this and not that or in addition to that? Made some incredible stuff by listening to the ancestors as I seasoned things, waiting for that quiet whisper in my mind's ear so to speak, saying, "Enough, child. You'll ruin the dish if you add any more."

hedgefox's avatar

I hope that saddle catalog also sells bareback pads, rope halters, and lead ropes that can be repurposed into reins. 🦊 The dangerous magic is convincing a half-ton prey animal that you are a trustworthy predator and a safe leader.

John Hollowell's avatar

I look forward to gifting this book Christmas 2026. A delightful story, with very true elements.

Deb's avatar

It's been a very long time since I've read a story with a smile of joy. I love it. I'm saving Pts. 2 and 3 for later savoring.

J. G.'s avatar

Fantastic, wonderful, mischievous beauty, that.

Beatrice's avatar

No grandkids yet, but I'll be buying a couple of copies (at least). I can't wait to see the art also.

I started reading it to my husband in the car. We got home & he stood in the open car door as I finished it.

John Block's avatar

Excellent tale... a book of such would be a MARVELOUS gift to my Grandson - he'll be 8, next Christmas...

Kelly Ludwig's avatar

I've got a 6 & a 2 1/2 yr old granddaughters - I can't WAIT to get this book for them! It's absolutely perfect!!